naw i didnt like this work on your wordplay and a list of other things i cant point out becoz of ya wordplay keep writing cheers
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naw i didnt like this work on your wordplay and a list of other things i cant point out becoz of ya wordplay keep writing cheers
...lol...nyce drop kiddo...i know wutchu goin' thru my gf just broke up wit me last week...shit's crazy gawd...
nice work dude i like the 3rd verse the most
this peice was hot you do need to work on ya structure though. but other than that it was pretty good. i liked the way you layed out ya rymes an it had emotion in it that always makes it better. so could you return the favor an leave feed on this.
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