Story of A Mass Murderer

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This Was Like Microsoft Stock It Started Pretty Low But Built Itno An Extremely Lucrative Product. I Enjoyed The Read But You Have To Be Able To Remain More Consistant. The Topic Was Egh But That Is Just Me Nice Job

structure:10
vocab:10
stickin 2 the topic:10
overall:10.......it was pretty dope

idk if i follow u non...i mean it was a topical drop actualyl...so i was goin for a story line..start low and built it up 2 like an woa ending ya dig!...thanx tho i will take ur ish into consideration