thankz fo da feed uppin
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thankz fo da feed uppin
uppin
Wow, Thats all i gotta say is wow
U Really Did good in dis one
The flow was Great & da Wordplay WaS perfect
U Hit Multies alot also, The Rhymes went perfect 2day
I Felt alot of Imagery, U Should keep writing
Im lookin Forward to read more shit from u
keep it up
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you had emotion,and even the little bit of emotion you displayed was short lived,your wordplay and rhymescheme were both simple and not too short of elementary,but you have some potential,id just loose tha gangsta shit,bring it more lyrical and hip hop,everyday shit,lyricism in its purest form.i aint dissin your shit im just givin you my opinion.keep droppin and elevatin.~1`