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Uppin #5...
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Uppin #5...
IP: 70CD 0DDF
you not and artist and thats a fact
when my gun go off you will get more claps then a noya clap
aiite..flowed well at least
you should name your self artifiction cause you a fake ass nigga
you talk big but you just a little ass nigga
nah,, rhyming nigga with nigga wasnt too good holmes... and a basic punch
after this you wont rap no more you'll be sittin on the bleacher
i got a picture of you dead like im an art teacher
uhm.. a bit undeveloped.. i mean to say an art teacher is dead?...uhm? which art teacher is dead then.. gotta be more specific really
there no coming back from this get it thrugh your head
i'll lay artifact down like you ready to go to bed
ok ish.. too undeveloped tho as a wordplay attempt..
on this mic im like a person in college an you an you a elementary kid what s a problem with this
you still hook on phonics
my flows so hot i got you beggin for water
killa flows make threat like you need a lawyer
flowed ok but no effective punch really
vs
IP: 7300 0AEE
Ill 'start this off with heat' like a 'throttle-&-ignition'
The stories Enid Blyton wrote could topple-his-prewrittens
ok..nice rhymes
He claims to be a guy, but that image must be ruined
Coz he hasnt had a dick since his father gave it to-him
...uhm? not great creativity.. but nasty still
Hes far below my level, man this kid-can-get-shanked
Its known that ive got 'Cash in check/cheque' like 'trips-to-the-bank'
..yea! i liked this one fosho...haha
He raps sloppily, so its clear that he aint stoppin-me
One punch will put 'Cash in a bag' like an 'armed robbery'
decent play still
If you copied my whole verse, you still aint matchin-me
Your nuthin but gas...
... so when your touched with flames its a catastrophe
nice rhymes.. at the same ti,e catatrophe spoiled the play a bit.. decent still
vote-artifact....for he used more lyrical elements to effect.. a few wordplays.. a couple og creative punches.. cash just needed a lil more thought into his lines to add originality.. and to strengthen up the wordplay a bit more and fix the flow/structure rhyme scheme sum more
pz