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cuz you a bitch....callin me out...you must be fuckin-high
check this rednecks homepage...its a fishin n huntin-guide**
you cry..."no dick-rides"...but you dont have a dick-to-ride
in fact...before this line...no one knew that Lunatick's-a-guy
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lunatik i didnt really like ya verse some of your lines were streched
and your punches wasnt hittin at all but u had one gd personal
and tha was it but just work on having harder hittin punches
v-wordplay no hate
a yo word play got my vote way betta personalz
explain yourself please or i cant accept the vote
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Originally Posted by king_of_flowz
That garbage
you aint a Lunatick* ....intead of pussy you stay choosin-dick
fuck the crew-you-wit...you wont win...you'll either lose-or-quit
a yo killed him wit yo opener and yo punches hit way harder
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Originally Posted by king_of_flowz
At Your D/R
For Ur Unexplained Vote The First Time U Need To Break it Down
Like This
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WOrdplay: 3 Lines Of Explanation
Lunatick: 3 Lines Of Explanation
Got It :mad:
You must have shit on your mind constantly kid....whenever you think
Because everything i've seen you write i've Red Bull like energy drinks
Good concept but ya shouldve worded it better
came out thinking you good with a alphanumeric display
......................but your dick riders are dwindling away
cuz you could bring scrabble to the battle and still wouldn’t come with the Word Play
Good wordplay here nce punch
couldn’t win if you had integrated logistic support
cuz like midget prostitution........just by dropping that bull shit
you selling your self short............................................. .....
Good wordplay - good concept - decent punch
Try to get recognize but homie you aint even half that
but at lease you improve from not being notice to getting laughed at
Mehh - concept is to predictable - not that hard of a punch
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you aint a Lunatick* ....intead of pussy you stay choosin-dick
fuck the crew-you-wit...you wont win...you'll either lose-or-quit
meh ok opener couldve been worded better
cuz you a bitch....callin me out...you must be fuckin-high
check this rednecks homepage...its a fishin n huntin-guide**
Nice wordplay good punch lmfao
better luck next time....ya muthafukin lines-are-empty
ya rhymes-aint-catchy...couldnt get nice if you were friendly
Decent couldve been worded better but it was good
you cry..."no dick-rides"...but you dont have a dick-to-ride
in fact...before this line...no one knew that Lunatick's-a-guy
Meh it was decent
cuz you come like a bitch...so now im breakin-you-off
ya first loss........."Order up".......on a plate-witta-fork
Decent closing, but ya couldve re-worded it better
Damn Lunatick did the damn thing and this battle was very close but for havin more creative punches my vote would have to go to Word Play only because he had some more creative punches, but both had very good verses
vote = Word
please return the favor Honestly
Links in my sig
put it like this...............
luna- you had a good flow going, you also had harder punches, structure was okay....good shit for a newb....6.9/10
Wordplay- you had a better flow, no hard punches, but you was knoccing with the personals, and the structure was nice....7.3/10
flow/word
punches/luna
personals/word
structure/word
multies/none
v/wordplay.............work on punches fams
WoRD^
Lunatick came very basic here i didnt like his verse at all
wordplay had better punches flow \/=word .. no hate