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Dont rhyme a word with another word, bit you have some talent
I mean dont rhyme a word with the same word.......
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Good drop, Good topic, I really could see the imagery, good use of vocabs and multies. Your flow was pretty decent, overall it was good homey keep it up
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nice open mic song man but always train yourself
wtf you mean by train myself i do everything w/ music i do myself
The hook was decent & the first 6-8 lines of the verse were a really good start, but it seemed to slowly go downhill after that. You showed a lot of emotion throughout & the flow was good.
Overall, i liked it...
It would be appreciated if you could drop a quick vote in this battle:
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I been through the rapping about women stage... got thru thast tho.. no offense but fuck a bitch in the ass until shes wont shit right for a week.. as for rhymes and vocab complex and flowing.. Good rhyme shitty topic.. hola
is it me or does it seem like 9/10 OM's here are written about heartbreak or women in general, shits really gettin old homie, i know you write good shit but my advice is, stop fuckin writing about women, its cool every once in a while to show your emotion and of course you have to write romantic shit like this to be an expandable writer, but please just stop writing about females...
thank you
i dont write about females very often i usally write about real life situations or some shit like that
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