A Change Of Heart

it sucks horrbly

































lmfao nah j/p its dope the only word i can describe it
















































hit up this battle thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=266067















































































now stfu

nice style.. flow..format delivery..yeah!
diddnt like the end lines much..sort of an anti climax..

had good imagery thruout still// cool text...good consistancy
seems a bit repetitive on certain words to me.. uhm?... maybe it can work that way as well... vocab could of been a lil more extensive....or sharper in places.. but still you did get your voice accross pretty well..
topic can easily work well coz its like sum from the heart stuff. with plenty of emotion in there.. so yea good joint

check this 1 yo
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=264921


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Thanks.

yo dat waz ill g

feelin dis shiit fa real B .. niice flow, gud vocab cudda been betta but stil da topic was good... nice emotion ya used & i like ya style of writin..
deffo read mo' shiit from u... keep workin @ it...

Thanks Ma'

was i the only one that noticed that G souljha and gansgta disciple had the exact same comment?

I like the drop, it told a story. No real multies but the flow was good. My only question is, How could your girlfriend hide a 3 year old kid from you?? Head Scratcher.

keep writing.

Thanks Meng

this was a good om. it had everything. great flow good topic an it stayed on topic. i liked it alot just keep at it. oh an wasn't expecting it to end like that

real good quality peic eman, flow was real consistent and rhyming wa son key, nice stuff man. Structure was alright, few lines were forced, but this was real nice man.

aye hot shyt man... right now im just speechless man i mean like dam thats some sad shyt i hope that shyt never happens to me man i would piss my pants or been gone ... i deffiently wouldn't be tring to hear they convo lol man tight shyt though

Whooooooooooooooooooooooooo boy - yo i done seen a lot of ya battles n i aint know what the fuss wuz about cuz it seemed like ya skills wasnt matchin ur rec - but damn, good imagery, had niggaz into it, had a hell of a twist n i good asss endin - this is the first o.m. ive seen from u, hope 2 see more, good fuckin drop

Thanks For Feed Ya'll.

yeah i know shit you deserve it shit keep it up..................

Thanks.