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Decent.
Really decent...by far the best I've seen from you. That 50 cent piece could fuck your rep up, so don't write anything like it again. And keep writing more like this one and you will get much better as you go. You put a lot into this and I hope to see improvements in the next month or two...Pz.
~Nash
ty rise!
Uppin.
not bad that was nice
honestly, it needs to get more complex, its not that good to me, im not hating or nothing, but i think pieces like this should be better, storytelling wise, its the same as any other thing
nice work cuz...i'm really feelin this peice...i like the subject that u hit on..and the wordplay mad it better...i'm not just sayin this cause we in the same crew either shit was on poin tcuz...keep it up
Thank you riseing for both me open mics.
this was nice here shorty. i liked ya wordplay, the meaning, vocab, everything. keep doin ya thing shorty.
Aiight thanks.
Upping for all four of my om's.
rise