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uppin again...couple more ups and im done
This was an okay drop you had an okay topic good use of vocabs but I really couldnt feel your flow, you didnt have a bad structure. Overall it was pretty tight. Keep it up
aight thanks man uppin for more feed
uppin... 1 more after this and im done uppin
Uppin for the last time
You had a clear understanding of where you wanted this one to go, but when I got to the end I felt like it just kind of hit a wall. Sometimes simple is good, it's the easiest way to get your message across. But for my personal taste I like to see vivid immages and tricky word play. Check out "The wrongs of Africa". He did an outstanding job. All in all...I liked it. it made me smile. Keep 'em commin.