Random Spit ! Chek plz

I wouldnt know wat to do bou battles bro, u got msn?

damn dawg tha waz a nice spit the flow was there the vocab want 2 bad u need 2 worc on ye structere a little dawg but on the overall it waz sum well put 2gether
shit tha dawg peace

thnx 4 feed bro.

keep em comin

Uppin

mos def showing good potential.. flow was good.. vocab was good for a free/key-style... had a few decent concepts.. maybe could of done with a few more deeper concepts..instead of those few filler type lines .. coz a few lines seemed like thaat they lacked impact.. and was just rhyming for the sake of it.. but yeah parts did have good charactrer and rhymes.. ssome rhymes seemed a lil meh.. but thats all in a free-style still..

just keep adding the mettas and wordplays if and where you can


good for a free

stay up
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thnx man yeh i culdnt rely go dat deep, it was only pretty quick aswell. Ima drop a topic one soon and c how dat does.

keep em comin guys

uppin