An Incident in WWII

imagery - brilliant
emotion - deep (gd)
rhymin ws gd
structure ws gd, and for the topic it worked well
flow ws gd for the tone you created

gd topical piece
keep @ it

thanks dog, uppin'

Uppin' dogs need more feed

Good topic....like that shit....but the vocab was a little to basic.....it felt like i was in a movie script or some shit......good tho....It was just as long as i wanted it to be tho...lol...good shit tho..keep it up...8/10

Yea this is ma return ta topicals and i tried ta keepi it simple and effective so yea thanks uppin

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nice drop pak ur topic was very interesting but it kept me into it it, ur structure was fine but it was still real basic if u maybe italized it and centered it it might be more apealin 2 da eye. not jus plain text but every 1 has there own styles and clearly ur a nice mc. ur flow was great and it had ur own touch with some short lines and some lond and u didnt have 2 ryme every line i liked dat and it still flowed greatly. but over all great peace it kept me intuned. r a dope mc keep it up glad 2 be in ur crew realy see ur no noob leader

drop some feed on my topical lil e's story not great but its decent i think