The Passion that Lies Within a Soul

yeah good looks out bro fosho.. i'm always one to think i like variation to my flow... being a freestyler originaly...

for real like you said these are our tools of escape...and expressiuon of the inner mind i)'d add)


word up blud

Just checked this and damn it twas good
Vortex i reckon ya propa at this ish and the flow and rhymes were good, so yea keep it up

hav 2 agree wi most the commentz here cat ur good at this shit rhyme and flow was
brillant good vocabulare as well u write many poems kid or jus the odd 1s
like this alot peace

nigga you are off the hook with the flows, nice vocab keep it up

yeah good looks out yo
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peace

This was pretty dope, didn't lack much.
Real good drop, keep up, i want to see more.
And Lol, word to the person who said the title made them not want to read.
Same here, but i figured i'd give it a chance.
Sweet shit. :2thumb:

safe blud

uppers



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yo man i felt this. it reminded me of an old piece i did.


sometimes you gotta write about some deepness, and you actually pulled it off pretty good. props.


for some reason i thought of jus allah from jedi mind tricks when reading this

thanks for the look blud..

ill hit your joint up in an hour or so yeah


funny you should say that about jus allah.. ui wrote a joint called brainwashed a while back.. and when i posted it on another site somebody said i'm on sum jus allah shit..

tell the truth makes me sound out of touch but i'm not 100% who that is even.. i'm sure i must of heard them but dont know them or something.. ill have to check them out from now on i think n see wassup

peace

jus allah is one of the the sickest rappers out.


its a huge compliment.

yer word dat guy mental, cnt memba if i already posted to this but this was a tight drop. I dnt got 4 much deepness poetic style but man i know its hard and u done a very gd job at it. Rhymes were nice as were multis and shit. ur flow was sick and the storyline was flowin. Ill drop

Peace :)
hit me up on Random Spit! unless u already ave lol

fosho...fosho


safe

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