shit was ill really good imagery and vocab story line was decent but it could be better and rymes was ok overall nice drop stay at it
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shit was ill really good imagery and vocab story line was decent but it could be better and rymes was ok overall nice drop stay at it
wtf at RaM and the other kid....
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fuck'n clowns
up
nice opening poetic bars fosho...
nice solid multies
...heavy imagery..
ill structure...
nice text...
maybe 1 or 2 rhymes i diddnt like.. but thats me and my own accent
...vocab was good
thats all from me for now...
drop a line on my new joint
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261974
thanx
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gime some feed