Not in sync - hollow din ... Its not all the cat sat on the mat ;)
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Not in sync - hollow din ... Its not all the cat sat on the mat ;)
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Nice verse issue,i liked your alot.It was good.The vocab was ok,but the multies were nicebecause it kept the verse's flow smooth.The Vocab D used was ok as well,but coulda been better witht he multies.Structure was good too,and the imagery you both had was nice.The emotion you guys had was nice as well.This piece though had some creativity in differeparts of the verses which was good.
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