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you got talen andability it was conveyed improperly but you made it known you have skill.... this wasnt great but a start you just have to make it more umpgh wordplay isnt everything the message and delivery is important....keep elivating.
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i shatter souls as i launch your corpse in the manifold of a catapult
you thrive off my street anecdotes like fiends that feel that need to overdose
Nice...Good structure and Nice flow...with tha multi's...Vocab is nice also...the whole overall concept was aiight tho'..but ur Vocab,Multi's made it read Dope tho'...I like it...For ur 1st...You did a Damn good Drop.
9/10
sorta reminds me of Papoose...
