I'm So Fly Remix

Alright, since my opinion is like that of Jesus', I'll respond because you asked me too.

You have pretty cool lyrics.. good delivery.. good flow. I don't really like the beat that much. Overall, your shit was pretty cool.

Just eat bacon.

Nice man you'r flow went nice with the track..Enjoyed it..Makes me wanna make a track now :)

Not bad Cel, honestly I wasn't expecting much but you supprised me dude.
You better use some of those instrumentals i found for you though,
shit wasn't easy :mad:

its sexy i like it
your quality is great

i like it

banks sucked in that

but it was dope

cel now send me ur album and put me on ur track

LOL... You sound not like what I expected.
It's pretty good though. Maybe a lil more complexity in the rhymescheme. And more complexity in the lyrics. Flow was good for the most part.

I didn't like the beat one bit. Just sounded, like, bleh.

You got a good flow, but I don't like your voice. Iunno why, just something about it. Delivery is chill. Qualitys aight. Banks brought the track down in my opinion.

You shoulda did it to the original beat.

Nice...

Neeed some one like you in my crew.

Lethal En-Counter

eh hmmm .. I don't like the remix honestly the beat just doesn't fit it at all ... alright lets check your flow .. its sounding pretty good some alright lines .. you got the heat eh?. cocking guns and killin people .. hmm lol .. aight well .. the lyrics are more creative then most of the killin em stuff .. banks doesn't right on this at all during the chorus .. during the verse its a little better keep workin on your beats homey a little repetive and shit keep the flow up too make a new song to that next time =) . spz.

wasn't as bad as i'd it would be...decent shit from cel considering he used to be a pretty good text head..anyways, keep at it nigga...*merks the pee pee on ur face*

^ word!

thanks for the feed everyone

the accapella doesn't work lol.

but Celestial got good voice and delivery. Except you sound like you trying too hard, forcing the multis and shit. but you got some ok shit right here. the beat would sound nice on its own tho i think.

God fatty, way to spread the fattyness to the fatty squad in fatville. www.jennycraig.com fatass.


anyways. . I didn't like your fatty lyrics that much, I don't care bout yo platinum fatty. but. . you have alot better delivery than the average fatty that comes out and drops a fatty on us. but yo. . . stay fat, keep recording, and keep perfecting your delivery. . although it was already nice. . specially for a fatty. . . lyrics be shit though son.

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I love you Dez

and gracias Zed

Impressive... you even gave banks a run for his money ;) .. lol but the flow was great.. lyrics were nice.. they are all good... overall i like it.. impressive like i said before..

hit up "Fly Away"

ok listening .. beat is original sounds a lil shakey tho.. a bit of a keyboard sound. it's strange that u used lloyd banks.. he saying hes rich and g- unit is going to the top this year and ur lyrics didn't go with that.. but its kl.. u on a track lloyd banks.. why not! how people u know can say im on atrack with lloyd banks.. but he sounds a lil out like he wasnt mixed in properly.. but ur gd.. quality could be better .. sound a lil behind the beat.. but u had a nice flow,.. emotion.. voice sound strectched tho.. u may need to work on that.. sounded like u were struggling to get out ur verse... try stopping at the end offf a line and coming in afta if ur running out of breathe... but just keep doing it man...