Will Do....thnx for feed
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Will Do....thnx for feed
wow topic on this was really unique just weird also weird ending but it was good keep droppin
leave feed on my om what happens next
thnx for feed....i'd appreciate if u left more tho
yup yup bumin
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Woken Up, Dog Liking My Face, Hair Standing From My Neck To My Shins
I Hear My Alarm Clock Beeping From Hours Ago, “Oh My God I Slept In!!!”
Best Lines was your openor. This was an ok peice, but I didnt like the storyline, it was kind of boring. Not much vocab or complexity here, pz.
thnx
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Man? The topic was original, you had hints of comedic ability and even some nice potentially well written lines in there, yeah this was a bit silly, but ti wasnt serious so who cares about anything else,
I liked it :) You made me smile and you came original, with a twist, and some nice words and stuff. It just show that you can potentially write a wonderful piece ;)
Nice work!
Check Anna Maria in my sig :thumbup:
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nice verse homie keep it drilling homie like the topic not many people would have choose the topic keep it up
Wow Finally U Aint Hatin......Thnx......
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Bump 4 Mellysa Ford
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