um ok were gonna put both of yo verse as one verse
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um ok were gonna put both of yo verse as one verse
this is his verse
kc mutha fucker thats my name* high riding gangsta wit money n fame* listen u punk stay out my hood or yall the feel the pain* of my fist penetraiting ya brain* like a fucking cargo train now i garrentie dat will leave a stain*
this is you "i suck reel bad i rap for free cos my lame as lyrics cant earn no money/
ima pollitely tell you to cease and desist/
cos you are about to cease to exist / wast you with my guns or my fist /
man wud u listen to this /
this fools probly never had a kiss /
lol i dont no wats goin on XD im just blazin high as a motherfucker
lmao all we do now is wait on the votes to come in
aww are we done im not finished yet i aint had my fun/
man this may be my first rap but my raps are so tight i can hold down hell/
but fuck hell lets talk about heaven cos i get fucked up 22/7./
the other 2 hours i spend with ya mum XD did ya know she likes it up the bum/
ok man now iv had my fun /
young C wins, obvious reasons, better structure by far , better punches etc . V/Young C
aight, ima break down why... without hate....
aww are we done im not finished yet i aint had my fun
man this may be my first rap but my raps are so tight i can hold down hell
but fuck hell lets talk about heaven cos i get fucked up 22/7.
the other 2 hours i spend with ya mum XD did ya know she likes it up the bum
ok man now iv had my fun
1st line and 2nd line dont rhyme, you rhymed "bum" with "fun"... kindergarten shit, 22/7...wtf...doesnt rhyme wit nethin there.... uh........ all ya takin bout is you n gay shit " ya mum, up the bum " ......uh.... find new words? thats all i can say, and come with punchlines.... keep writin tho man, keep improving ....
is yall der this post is bare /
lets get this shit blazin up in here /
ima start this shit like its my career /
oh oh young chopper dont cry dont cry heres a tissue to wipe away that tear /
so if i was u now i wudnt blaze some shit back cos ill make u fear /
keep improving my rymes allready making u briusing /
yall know i win and so do i anyways ill meet u up in the sky cos im so high i might fuking die/ XD
y u still rappin?the battle is over all we need now is votes
chopper u aint writing back ? wot u ran out of rymes ? or does it just take u 2 years to write a dam rap ?
the battle is over u only suppose to rap once my guy all we need now is votes
word...otha cat all high and shit and he keep rappin eitha way Chop win by vote or Dq....Quote:
Originally Posted by Legacy01
thanks for the votes lets keep em commin people
yall got no tast wot u got friends votin for ya or some shit ???????????????