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the had good emotion and imagery... structure and flow was on point an di like the slight subliminal message of self conflict....good shit... my only complaint is da simplistic rhyme scheme and vocab..... work on those and you will be a force to be wreccened with...overall 7.5/10....
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thanks both of you..its very appreicated...uppin
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daymmm i liked that!...gr8 emotion man i was feeling it...you better keep good shit like that cummin so i can read more....9.5/10!
oh and gr8 flow...keep it real
dope!
