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alrite piece
flow - 6/10
structure - 5/10
rhyming - 7/10
like it? - 8/10
overall - 6.5/10
need to sort out your structure as loads of ppl will comment on tht, but i shouldnt really cus i did an om called 'Fuck My Structure' which had no real structure
anyway...try to work on your structure as tht in turn will improve your flow
can u comment on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...0&page=1&pp=15 if you haven't already
thnx, peace
whuts gud instigator...gud feed...took ya advice...
tryd to explain my structure more Good look...
and i replied to yours...peace
give feed on my piece, i will definitely give feed to your piece....
that was aiight, i was feelin it... was pretty good structure, and this was a lil different technique. was on point tha whole way and tha flow was gr8. Kept me readin this coz no parts were so much better then the other, they was all aiight and well written. keep droppin
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give feed on my piece, i will definitely give feed to your piece....