LW Title - O.V Dose (2-0) vs Untold (3-0)

You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell

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your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'

fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray

pretty good battle by both of yah but i ant like OV's verse..he had like one ok bar that was alright. u needed to come harder then that. ur punches were kinda weak no good personals. untold ur lines intrestin readin it. ur punches n personals was good. u came out better hiten him back 2 back. ok battle.

v.un

None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
Self-glory really
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
Pretty decent
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
Pretty meh, seen lots of lines like this
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Not really much of a diss, lol
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
Coulda used the uncalled for concept better

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cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
kinda cool
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
nah, not much of a diss
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
played nameplay
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
also pretty meh
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
seen cbs lines before but this was a good one

Not really a great battle for a belt match, but it was kind of close. OV had the igloo line that was alright, though nothing special. Untold didn't have a lot either, but the closer was nice, even though CBS lines are played cuz he made it into a nice personal. I'd say Untold got this by about 1 bar.

Vote - Untold

None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
^^lol all of those were borderline good, but I quoted them cos they were all worded pretty well and made me smile

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just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray

I actually enjoyed OV Dose's verse more. Untol needs better wording on some of his punches

v/OV Dose

your stupid.

















j/p. more votes please.

5-1, my lead.

vote people.

It was a nice battle and it was pretty close, but I'd say Untold took this one. His punches to me seemed to hit harder than yours OV but yours was still dope. I was just feelin' Untold's or Mr. Nice Guy's drop more. Untold seemed to dropped more consistent verses. No hate.

v/-Untold/Mr. Nice Guy

lmao ^ that is the kind of feedback that shouldn't even be allowed in FL, let alone in a league. ROFL.

It's completely generic and says NOTHING about the battle. It could be applied to ANY battle verse on the planet. Plus LMAO @ referring to untold dropping more consistent verses in general. No one cares about that in this battle, it's about THIS verse.

Feedback like this ruins the league

is that kid even in the league?

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Originally Posted by Vaskez

lmao ^ that is the kind of feedback that shouldn't even be allowed in FL, let alone in a league. ROFL.

It's completely generic and says NOTHING about the battle. It could be applied to ANY battle verse on the planet. Plus LMAO @ referring to untold dropping more consistent verses in general. No one cares about that in this battle, it's about THIS verse.

Feedback like this ruins the league

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lmao @ you saying all that about a battle you not even a part of.
but you are right. there needs to better feed... i mean, some battles don't need it and it would be pointless to vote 'cause one person did good and the other basically just blah'd it, but still, better feed is required.

and to ov, yea, hes in the league. he battle'd rec.

I type quick so it took me about 30 secs to type that. Plus I was making a point so it doesn't matter which battle it's in

i figured that, hence why i agree'd with you.

rise.

cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray


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None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell


a close battle indead my freinds,....but i felt's tho that untold just came with a fresher head,.....no hate to neither

dope battl;e tho

V/untold

v/untold. will explain in mag. good battle guys.

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Originally Posted by O.V.Dose

is that kid even in the league?

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dont think so and if so then he shouldnt be

i'll be voting in a sec

This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it

vs.

you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray

O.v came cool....but uh..untolds last line won him the battle imo. Good shit.

Vote.Untold