course, as in teacher, not inter as in internet. but word.
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course, as in teacher, not inter as in internet. but word.
yes, I got the course/teacher bit and the double meaning on intercourse. Dude, I'm comin back in this from LLL
Lol i know. You should stay up there too.
shits straiight. i drop'd weak to. i was just trying to finish this up quickly. s'all good though, maybe next week'll be better.Quote:
Originally Posted by Alphabetized
well anyway I'll try to make feedback useful for peeps who deserve it. You don't seem like the typical whiny big-mouthed kid, so respect for that, and don't worry it wasn't bad for the amount of time you've been at it.
And nah I ain't good enough to get better than a 4-3 record in LLL yet, so I'll stay here to elevate some more
^^ I love Vaskez lol
man i hope Aines puts me back in im ready to win dammit
makes no sence cuz his name is back 2 normal.
you wish kid... lets get some more votes and more in the one in my sig.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254563
hit up the link dammit
your 2-0, thats a typo or something, dun
cause to say thats fair, i'd have to be at one
(Naw.)
his ass is strung, hes done with no effort
i'll put you in the mag, but not the one by record
(Eh..doesn't make too much sense)
alph hates pussy, but dicks 'n ass'ment to his abdamins...
i'd tell this fag to kiss my ass, but he'd make an attempt at it
(Naw.)
alph, your unpopular and none of your shits tight
s'when we all think of alf, its always of this guy
(Heh.)
i'll hide, your ugly, but i'll still rip you, you'll die now
when i open'd that^ image, your nose almost poked my eye out
(Naw.)
and to say hes my dog, it'd be a female one, kid
cause when ya think about it, i know alph'a'bit'ch
(Ugh. Forced)
vs.
The story won't be untold, everyone'll see ya earn ya first loss
And i'd impale ur ass into jesus, just to get my points across.....
(Naw.)
.
.
This purple font bitch, comin with gay concepts, he wins the fag award
And if this cat is straight, then so is my grandmothers spinal cord
(eh.)
Ya elevation never soared, and being as wack as u, idk how u could live
funny how u never gave self glory, probably cause theres NONE to give
(Heh, ight.)
Leader of verbal intercourse? text? well that it explains it yet
cause the only inter-course you ever got, was from a teacher on the net
(Meh.)
And if you are what you eat, then its funny how it stays in sink
to why your downing boxes of twinkies, you fat fucking twink
(No.)
N just think, your positivly attracting wackness like a fucking magnet
& ya ur ryhmes r original... cuz not even an herb wud wanna sayya shit
(Meh.)
/v Alphabetized. I guess, this battle was actually ight and real close. I dunno..too close to judge almost, but I felt Alpha just edged it.
your 2-0, thats a typo or something, dun
cause to say thats fair, i'd have to be at one
lol made me laugh, was aight but not a hard punch
his ass is strung, hes done with no effort
i'll put you in the mag, but not the one by record
nah this was weak and way too basic
alph hates pussy, but dicks 'n ass'ment to his abdamins...
i'd tell this fag to kiss my ass, but he'd make an attempt at it
lol this was aight, humourous
alph, your unpopular and none of your shits tight
s'when we all think of alf, its always of this guy
No comment, i got no who idea who that guy is...But every single voter has said it was funny, i will just take there word 4 it. If ya feel the need to let me know who it is, would appreciate it.
i'll hide, your ugly, but i'll still rip you, you'll die now
when i open'd that^ image, your nose almost poked my eye out
lol aight
and to say hes my dog, it'd be a female one, kid
cause when ya think about it, i know alph'a'bit'ch
okish but kinda weak 4 a way 2 finish
v
The story won't be untold, everyone'll see ya earn ya first loss
And i'd impale ur ass into jesus, just to get my points across.....
aight opener, liked it
This purple font bitch, comin with gay concepts, he wins the fag award
And if this cat is straight, then so is my grandmothers spinal cord
lol i like the comparison, but callin people is gay, guess i kinda tried to freshn it up. ok
Ya elevation never soared, and being as wack as u, idk how u could live
funny how u never gave self glory, probably cause theres NONE to give
aight
Leader of verbal intercourse? text? well that it explains it yet
cause the only inter-course you ever got, was from a teacher on the net
weak
And if you are what you eat, then its funny how it stays in sink
to why your downing boxes of twinkies, you fat fucking twink
weak again imo
N just think, your positivly attracting wackness like a fucking magnet
& ya ur ryhmes r original... cuz not even an herb wud wanna sayya shit
weak closer
I wouldnt normally vote because i didnt understand one of untolds bars, because i dont know the "guy" in the pic, but without that bar he still won this battle imo.
Only 1 line that i thought was really weak, the rest was average, nothin great but aight, ive seen better from ya.
Alpha - U started off aight, which was on par with untold, but u kinda faded towards the end for me. I think u had some aight ideas, just need to reword some of ur punches, so they surprise who ever is readin it and aint as predictable.
V/ untold, for more consistency with the aight lines, both couldve came better though imo.
All honest feed.
Both check my battle, thanks.
Lol, at least i got 1 vote. I'll keep this near the top thanks for the feed y'all.
v/told. will explain in mu fuckin mag.
untold wins
Alphabetized (2-1)
Untold (3-0)