V/Tony
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V/Tony
uoppppn mannn
are you in the league?Quote:
Originally Posted by Zephyr
Meks
Yeh, nothing was really quotable IMO. We both know you can drop a lot better than this, it's all about the effort you put in. Just brush this loss of and keep dropping dope in the next weeks like you usually do.
Tony
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
^Eh. This was pretty cool. Wording could always be better.
Yeh, you got really lucky here. You've been dropping inconsistent man. You seem like your running low on concepts. I've seen you drop a lot better than this and I see you as some one who will go far in the league, you just need to drop to your potential.
Overall
Meh, battle overall. This had the potential to be dope but, it seemed like you both half assed.
v// Tony, More consistent
.. Vote on my battle y'all
na, i ain't 1/2-ass it more like 3/5 lol
Meks
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Man my lyrics?, like Philly Sweet Swishers sell
but ur rap bars are weak, u should switch ta jail
it was weak, but just for reference verse bars and jail bars is hella played imo
put ya kin up fam, cuz straight up they can git it
next day, u'll mourn in sickness like pregnant bitches
this was aight, better
if ur nice I'm triple that, I'm bomb a geek yea u made me rude
cuz when I come out, u'll be obsoleete like playstation 2
ok-ish
tony cant get a girl, and sure, he gets quotes but it aint much..
thas why he's sittin home alone, givin strokes like a paint brush
nah this was weak, and very simple
fuck it homey......youz a failure, u cant hold ya own
keep up wit me? Nah... youz a trailor like mobile homes
weak closer too imio
Kinda shocked at this verse, i expected alot better from u. I personally think you should not post your verse so soon, take the time to re-read it, because alot of this was weak. Maybe u rushed it but it wasnt up to par, and unless Tony comes hella weak, u cant win this battle.
Tony
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meh, afraid to drop 16.........
Watch ya back, i feel sorry for all the little boys
Even i like Candy, but Meks gots an Almond Joy
Eh why is people laughin? Dont make sense to me
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
This was betta, aight
Sure you got this battle wrapped, or so it may seem
U wouldnt have this War-Locked dressin as 1 4 Halloween
nope, weak
I saw u gettin prepared, makin ya verse perfect for this day
But you'll only be gettin ready for the Long Haul....of Shame
aight
You ain't accomplished shit, thinkin you did, your delerious
If Love Conquers All, Meks must've never had that experience!
lol, aight closer
You also came kinda weak imo. Maybe not as week as Meks tho, I didnt understand your opener for a start, but you was more consistent than Meks by like one bar, so i gotta give u the win. Couldve come harder though.
I know that u can both do better than this, alotta people say that i no, but this is fo real.
V/ Tony for being slightly more consistent, as you can see in my breakdown. But none of you came really hard.
Just my opinions, no offence to any of u.
Linkage
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254544
your slow lol
Almond Joy=All Men joy
yea..
faggots
lol.
vote tb easily
meks you had nuttin in my mind, that mournin wordplay while clever, was indirect as hell.
everything else was bad, or played, i got the feeling you half assed it. my advice, got witty and be harsh.
tb, you half assed it 2, almond wordplay was okay, and ya closer was good, but that's about, i guess you read meks' verse was like fuck it i'll give ya'll 2 decent punches.
vote tb
tony wins
Tony Brown (2-1)
Meks(1-2)