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^ Lets not start any beef in here,I see that as swaying ^
I know none of these people,
Uppin
no beef and dats not swayin im just speakin da truth
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
no punch to this
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
yuck, no
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
self-glory
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
not even true, it will change, lol
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
doesn't make much sense logically
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
finally something okay but played
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
not that funny actually. would work if his name was more wack
vs.
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
ass shit is so played
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
not really a good use of wordplay lol
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
statement, no punch
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
dick shit is so played
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
best line of the battle yet, not that bad, but a tip, you didn't need to say out twice.. just say out..... of the fucking league with dots like that
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
Statement, no punch
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
baber shit was good, but you used this awfully
Hmm, this was a pretty bad battle honestly fellas. Y'all need to get more creative with the concepts. After reading this a few times, I'd have to say Archileez had the outta of the league line which was the line of the battle. Not much else in his verse was really that good, but it was slightly more consistent than Barb so I'm giving this to him. I've seen better from you both though so step ya games up.
Vote - Archileez
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
Na
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
No
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
SG, and bad anyways
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
No
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
huh?
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
Ok, but played
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
No..
vs.
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
Played
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
not feelin it, but better then Barbs bars..
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
No punch, good set up though
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
lol good
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
lol nice, the repeated 'out' isnt needed though..
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
Where's the punch?
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
Good wordplay of his name, but doesnt go well with what u were talkin about.
Kinda a one sided battle, Barb had no good lines in this, u need elevation homie. Keep up. Arch had 2 good bars, and took this pretty easily.
V/ Arch
5-1
Rise
Meh drop from Barburyin, nothing exceptional.
Archilleez had better lines throughout and was funnier.
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
Vote: Archilleez
cool 6-1
this battle sucked seriously
it's like both of you came off like a 2 year hiatus or something because some of these lines were so played it wasnt even funny
barburyin's structure was well......bad
i dunno, arch came more consistent and was a little more creative so
v/ arch
omfg
seen alot of yo verses and must say there da worst
might as well shit on yo screen and wipe yo ass wit yo verse
Nah, real weak
kids like a broke down car so i'l give em a push
kid has no life so he uses his sig 4 internet puss
Nah
your wack so deres no need 2 spit hard, so i'l drop a sample
I'd show how dope i am in dis battle............................
..............................but battlin u is settin a bad examle
No, this was weak and terribly worded
dis kids now talkin shit 2 me wen just yesterday i was his idol
admins know he's always been wack...
so noweights always been and will be his title
No, way too simple
lips so dam chaps i know u aint forcin nuttin sweet, maybe bits
.........................it gets nasty.....................................
so its obvious punches crumble the second they touch yo lips
Nah, wording was terrible, the ...'s make it worse
soryy bout dis but exposin wack emcees like u is all i know
i mean i felt every punch u dropped...about 2 years ago
This was ok
c'mon herb do u actually think u will win vs me
i'l come wit da funniest punch in history...................
just by sayin dis herbs name Archilleez
Concept was ok but wording was poor
Your concept for sellin records, Was your best ive ever seen,
& ya verses are full of ass, like when i was fuckin six-teen,
Meh, ok I guess
You sound strangled in this thread, Ill pull the tight-rope, down,
So whilst i dettatch your head, Ill wreck your circus, clown,
Nah
Only voted for u last time, So this week would be a breeze,
Painfully got you on lock-down, Beating you with my keys,
Not bad
Bitch please give up the hard talk, Cant stand the smell of dicks,
Ur a recycler save ur breath, Youll need to blow up your chicks,
Not bad
Your tryin too hard with ur missin punches, Its causin u fatigue,
So im sympathetically helpin you out, Out of the fuckin' league,
[b]Getting rid of the second out would have made this hit harder, played though[/b
Think ur sat on pole position, Yeah im sharply goin through ya,
Nobody will admit they knew ya, At the morgue when we re-view ya,
Nah
To re-cap ur shits just sloppy, < The only reason ur re-laxed,
Now ive finished strippin ur shit, Theyll say Barb-err got anal waxed.
Funny but pretty weird
Archileez took this comprehensively. Barburyin had nothing to quote at all, Arch was just more consistent and came with better lines.
v/ Archileez
Arch wins
Archileez (2-0)
Barburyin (1-1)