TwixSin V.s Vortex...Topical...

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v/ twix

he had some flamin' multies, plus his storyline was very good, i liked his imagery as well, but vortex had some dope imagery, its really great, this was aclose battle but ive got to give it to twix,, great battle guys

TwixSin - good verse. Lots of good multies, and you were very topical. Only thing I would say is a few things sounded a bit forced n' shit, and you also dropped off a bit in the middle.

Vortex - hot shit man. You were on point the whole way, had good multies, and I was really just feeling the overall verse. Flow could have been better, I think that's the one place where Twix had you, but overall, your verse was just better....deep and shit....very well written.

v/Vortex

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Twix - The language you used was complex, which is always nice to see in a topical. Also you had a good use of multies and i think you told the story in a very personal way.

Vortex - I dont think you told the story in as much detail as twix, but it drew me in all the way through and made me want to find out what happened next. Twixs flow was better, i think some of your lines were stretched pretty bad, But overall you got more of a story into your verse, which is what got you this one..

Vote/Vortex

Good battle guys

twix- you you had sum great multeis real hot...ya sotroy was pretty cool interesting and your vocab was pretty complex it made the imagery a lil betta...rhymes were good and complex...nicely done with the lay out and the stuructre was giood and the flow was smooth

vortex- damn your stroy was hella hot it was interesting and creatvite ya rhymes weere good and your flow was continuesly smooth through out and ya strucutre was excellent....overall ya verse was the best out you 2

v/vortex for reasons above

nothing but an underestimate....

ill battle you again... i promise :P

im going to vote twix in this battle xellcent multies with a better over all verse in my opinion

vortex beat this guy more punches more rhyme vote vortex

good battle u both are wickid dope i liked both verses u guys are awsome

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this is gettin mad old

this is my last up

come on close this up folks
dont fuck about


up fucking 5

this was evenly match by both ppl.............................

T had a nice flow going, the concept was right on tracc, good stucture.....deep in details...thats whats good 7/10

vor had sum nice flow as well. nice vocab, good structure as well..... 7.5/10

Flow/tie
Structure/ tie
creativity/ tie
Concept/ tie
Vocab/ Vortex

v/Vortex

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This was aight...

Twix- cam kinda basic...your rhyme scheme was good, structure was off quite a bit, and most of your lyrics were basic...you had good multis and a few metas but nothing to get excited about...I understood your verse mostly until the part in white about your cousin and money being at stake...so lemme get it straight, your cousin robbed the house and stabbed you? but the thief had a gun? I'm lost there...explain :mad:
Other than that the verse was ok...

Vortex- good verse overall, it was kind of complex, especially at the beginning but I could see the dopeness fading toward the end of verse...I can also tell that your from Europe somewhere, by your wording :) but your rhyme scheme seemed off, and thats how I could tell you had an accent...good shit overall


Gotta go...but V/ vortex, for having a better overall verse

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I gotta go with vortex. His words were good and he really flowed them.

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