Thanks for votin everybody.
And good battle Mac.
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Thanks for votin everybody.
And good battle Mac.
Word. Good battle. You got potential dude, just work on those concepts.
v/mac.. will explain in mag. good battle.
Mac, despite ur name, ur no fuckin comp to me, ho
aint it obvious wen it come to battles, Mac cant Windows
bad setup, nice delivery
here since 04', which is also the ONLY year u considederd dope
i hope YOU remember wen u were ill, cuz unfortunatly WE dont
he is dope, but this is still funny
just give up now faggot, ur future in LLL Jr. is lookin grim
queer took it the wrong way wen i told Mac i was crushin him
i get it but its not good
ull never be among the best, this, anyone here will agree
sure ur reachin greatness, but thats only cuz ur under me
good concept needed some re-wording
voters like my punches and style, ur wackness just doesnt appease
my rhymes blow u away like a fuckin hurricane......macs...a breeze
this seems like two setup lines, where is the delivery line?
vs.
I'm dope as fuck, so Auto ain't nothing to fear yo,
'n you rock ya record in ya sig, like HALF THE LEAGUE AIN'T 1-0!
LOL, so true
If this kid says he's the shit, then the punk's lying,
cuz I'll have auto in a ditch like I went drunk driving.
nah not feelin this
Fuck ya fake mob crew, you stupid posing wigger cunts, n Auto,
How you gonna launder cash when ya CLOTHES stay dirty for months.
Dont like the rhyme scheme, but 2nd line is good
Explain how this herb's gonna front like his flow's sweet,
Shit...
I'm quick to lay out mat like setting up for gymnast meets.
nice play on the name
Why you gotta front on me? Dude, don't worry 'bout disgrace..
Nigga, follow your heart..I threw it over there someplace.
aight nothing to special here
v/Mac basically cause to me it came down to the openers and Mac's was more personal and true which made it hit harder.
If this kid says he's the shit, then the punk's lying,
cuz I'll have auto in a ditch like I went drunk driving.
Explain how this herb's gonna front like his flow's sweet,
Shit...
I'm quick to lay out mat like setting up for gymnast meets.
Why you gotta front on me? Dude, don't worry 'bout disgrace..
Nigga, follow your heart..I threw it over there someplace.
vs
mac, despite ur name, ur no fuckin comp to me, ho
aint it obvious wen it come to battles, Mac cant Windows
just give up now faggot, ur future in LLL Jr. is lookin grim
queer took it the wrong way wen i told Mac i was crushin him
Could Reworded it^
v/mac his punches was just harder and wittier came more consistant in this good attempt auto pz
uppin votes.
Automatic!
Mac, despite ur name, ur no fuckin comp to me, ho
aint it obvious wen it come to battles, Mac cant Windows
~Vs~
Macabre
If this kid says he's the shit, then the punk's lying,
cuz I'll have auto in a ditch like I went drunk driving
Auto- shit, nice opener!- i wish the rest of the verse were that complex- mostly basic 1-2 punches- u had like one other nice personal (2004 line)- decent closer, kinda played, but not bad- overall good verse not much filler- nice n consistant-
Mac- I liked that auto/drunk driving line- coulda hit harder with rewording tho- decent opener- the off n on multis really fucked with ur flow- ur launder bar was streched as hell- nice with the wordplay throughout- but the punches were still soft-
Vote Automatic more consistant punches throughout his verse-
12-1, Mac.
lol
V. Mac
If this kid says he's the shit, then the punk's lying,
cuz I'll have auto in a ditch like I went drunk driving.
ROFL^^
Just to clarify a little bit on every single person talking about rewording, someone else is not going to reword a concept the same exact way that someone wants them to. That would be biting. Heads say, yea reword this, but yo thats mostly the kids saying that that could not even come up with that concept in the first place. The fact is people word things the way they do because it is original to them. I mean shit, when you read the line, do you want him to say exactly what you would of said? No, people need to put thier own twist on it.
If this kid says he's the shit, then the punk's lying,
cuz I'll have auto in a ditch like I went drunk driving.
vs
Mac, despite ur name, ur no fuckin comp to me, ho
aint it obvious wen it come to battles, Mac cant Windows
V/Auto, liked the line better. No hate, but I don't see why everyone thought the ditch line was so dope, seemed kinda bleh to me.
uppity
vote mac, he more consistent than auto, auto's last like 3 bars didn't hit too well or at all in my opinion, greatest punch was more on the glory tip than actually being aimed at mac, so auto you need to watch that, mac just consistently attacked his opponent, which won it for him.
auto work on staying consistent you coulda had him.
vote mac
Auto:
ull never be among the best, this, anyone here will agree
sure ur reachin greatness, but thats only cuz ur under me
Mac:
I'm dope as fuck, so Auto ain't nothing to fear yo,
'n you rock ya record in ya sig, like HALF THE LEAGUE AIN'T 1-0!
Explain how this herb's gonna front like his flow's sweet,
Shit...
I'm quick to lay out mat like setting up for gymnast meets.
Why you gotta front on me? Dude, don't worry 'bout disgrace..
Nigga, follow your heart..I threw it over there someplace.
Overall:
Well, Auto, you had some funny ideas man, but they didn't
make me laugh at all. Your punch that I quoted was quite
played but it still made me laugh. Mac', your wording is bad
which hinders a lot of people battling. But your punches
are hella funny specially the gymnist one. Creativity is qualiy.
Props for both showing.
Vote:Macabre
AuTOmAt!c- The 'Windows' line was your crowning moment, but apparently that concept is played, so pretty much your stuff was OK throughout, nothing particularly creative shone through.
Mac- Far from your usual calibre, but you had enough humour in your jabs to get a few chortles.
Vote: Macabre