Sun Tzu. vs Tha Lizard

This battle was not really that close in my oppinion, Lizard had too many stretched lines, no problem with the rhyming, but the lines had too much excess stuff in them, and made the verse lose it's flow.

Quote:

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Look Tha Lizard carry the heat and you know it'll bust//
Your flows bout as high as the I.Q...........................
.........................of the kids on the short yellow bus//

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See what I mean? By the way, ^^ that was funny as fuck. :2thumb:

However, since Sun Tzu had some really good punches, and a better flow, (sick wordplay as well.) LOL, coloring books. SHit had me laughing. Sorry to say it Lizard, but My vote sadly has to go to Sun Tzu for better flow, and wordplay. But you aren't bad Lizard, and I am in no way saying that, just that in the long run, Sun had a better verse. Peace

Vote=Sun Tzu.

Peace.

Lizard-
Your flows bout as high as the I.Q...........................
.........................of the kids on the short yellow bus//
lol..nice

vs-
Tzu


I mean it's like his spits went bankrupt how i got em shooken
i'll give u credit where its due,n then loan u an ass whoopin
lol..dope
Let's be real guy's this cat named after something that eat flies
I'll cop you a bracelet n chain to match that ring around ya eye
cool

wordplay-Tzu
flow structure-tie
punches-tzu
multies-tzu
vocab-tie

vote tzu
for
a more direct verse with personal effects thrown in and good shots at wordplay

Punches - Lizard
Multi's - Lizard
Flow - Sun
Vocab - Lizard
Hostility - Sun

Vote - Lizard
Why - Nice Punches Dawg...!!

Alrighy 1 more vote.
Uppin #3.

I mean it's like his spits went bankrupt how i got em shooken
i'll give u credit where its due,n then loan u an ass whoopin
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^^was a good punchline man................nice

U little rap fakes get crushed, Ya lil lizard...You've been warned
i'd take u on the ride of ya life,but ur not tall enough to get on
By the way i keep the win tuck'd you'd think my rhyming suck
It's like this lizard had sex with a cold but he's just a sick fuck
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^^nice metaphor with a punchline...


hopefully he'll leave just watch him,fumbling,we assume him shook
If rhyme's a art form then you're the equivalent of Coloring Books
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^^NICE NICE line homes..........its over


V/ ST for better punches Metaz and creativity.