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thanks for the feed
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yo feed on the first Om in my sig and I will hit this up
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uppety up up up!!!! lol word
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I love your written shit it has so much emotion in it I like this one too ...when I read it it was like a movie like I was there to see wat happen you put alout of detail and emotion in it good pieace keep it up
thanks for the feedback
^^word..... upping this for dope feed
Emceer- your verse had sum good rhymes but your strucutre was not all that good...vocab was iight...not that complex but pretty good and descent...complextity in ya verse eas iight...preetty good.....your verse is like a A-
DEF Reaper- your verse was tight....vocab and rhymes were not simple they were good and complex....totlaly good flow and very even strucutre...your verse had sum creatvity in it....your verse ewas wicked good overall ya verse scores a A+
Vafinest- your verse was good...it had sum good rhymes a bit too simple....ya flow was smooth continuelsy..and strucutre was even.....ya verse had sum sort of compleixty..ya verse was good overall ya verse scores a solid A
overall this drop was tight...cool topic
total score for drop ----- solid A
hit up linkz in sig..thanks
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rise...
Like your climbing to the top...
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I thought this was dope as fuck, awesome collab - I think DEF took this slightly, but vafinest and EmceeR were there too - Good flow, wordplay and you held ya verses well, all y'all peep me out at -
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=253670
-KriminaL-