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good shit here homie.You had a good storyline to go with your topic and thats good.Also you had good Imagry and good emotion in your piece too.When I read it I could get a picture in my head of what was going on in this piece.Also you had a good structure and good use of your vocabulary too.Keep up the good work homie I hope to see more from you soon.Check out my new OM called written thoughts when you get a chance.
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u shud word ya flow better
nice lyrics definitely not elementry
ok grammer
flow was sorta on target
concept=nice
that pretty much summs it up keep it up homie :)
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that was some nice shit homie ur word play was nice and i was feelin ur topic. ur flow was nice and vocab was real good now that is a nice peace of work and ur stil a noweight woooooo ull be great in the future keep elevatin
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really nice man. It was very complex, and i like that. Great vocab in their too. Nice flow and struct. I really liked it homie.
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