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Forgiving this kid, “pray” to me, im ur “god” so “kneel”//(sig)
Cause I got this shit “locked”, like weed in a “Ziploc” “bag”, wit a closed “seal”//
(mehh)
This is just a piece of ma “meal”, son u still an “orderve”//(orderve-snack)
Cause “dog”(dawg) I “shitted” u, im letting “rookies” “curb” this herb//
(mehh)
Kid Ur lines is weak, ma “punches” be leaving u “bruising”//
cause ill demolish ur “game” ”easy”, while mine is “still cruising”//(game ft easy e-still cruising)
(nice)
and kid u “born” to be “true”, while ur “royalty’s” a shame//
cause I “light” up like im “fusin”, murking a “vet” that has “noweight” under his “name”//
(lol nice personal)
and u answered my callout, now look how im leaving this battle like “Katrina” hit it//
cuz when u say u a “born vet”, u mean u “cure animals”, just admit it//
(lol nice personal)
vs
dude couldnt wait to lose,he was so ANXIOUS he had me CONFUSED
u beating me is ERELAVENT,so id jack em up and teach him his donts and do's
(meh)
i say FUCK dis kid,cause u not on my level my NIGG
fag ass MASTERBATIN that ERECTION to dat pic of 50 cent in his SIG
(alrite)
he PLOTTING on STOPPING me,so im a attack him VICOUSLEY
U TESTING ME? well my semiauto will put 100 holes in yo bumby ass white T
(na)
HONESTLEY i think u good ya flow tight yea u aiight.....SCRACTH dat u suck
somebody offered him 1mill for his rhyme book,he said i dont want to con u
.................................................. ........cause its really worth a buck
(lol nice one)
there wont be no hesitation,merk him to were theres no explanations
BOTTOM LINE theres no future for so go back to school and get ya EDUMACATION
(mehh)
yo my vote was on punches and personals also structure...born vet you is alrite but killa had gotten you with better punches and personals.tho u is still good.
BTW PLEASE CHECK OUT BATTLES IN SIG..
v/killa
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thanks for the vote and ill be sure to vote in ur battlesuppin for more votes
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uppin for honest votes come on people vote up ill retrun the favor
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i give dis one to born vet just liked his verse better no hate go vote on my battles vs cocain and bjammin
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kkilla had better verse overall. more clever combos that hit.
that line about the rhymebook is funny as fuck though ( highly original)!!!!!!
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this was a weak battle kkilla all of ur punches were weak except for tha last 2 bars born vet that rhymebook lines killed his whole verse imo anyways..that shit was funny as hell so u get my vote for having better punches no hate
v/bornvet
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yo i say KKILLA takes this with just a lil bit more.......lil more punches and METAZ, FLOW, CREATIVITY, INTRO, CONCLUSION, VOCAB.............damn just a lil bit more....some where tie though honestly.........but justa lil more than BORN VET.
V/ KKILLA
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RTF on the battles in my sig homes.................honest vote peace
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Aigh Aight Aight AIght...
Killa- good punches some still strectched but its coo, you really need to work on that, I saw a lot of personals and what not a bit of wordplay but your punches lacked that pizzaz I see in other battles you've had...work on the wording and shit structure still noobish but whatever it doesn't take away from the punches so its straight...
Vet-your punches were blah...exactly blah...semiautos are no nos on the net, we are NOT net thugs thugs dont get on the net, they have better things to do...ya feel me?
So no Semiautos and shit putting holes in bummy white Tees...the rest of ur lines were meh but a couple were straight, so your verse wasn't completely bad..work on ur wording and dont stretch em so much...
V/Killa for better punches...
linx n mah sigg-e
