Bodybag

damn nice shit flow nice words blendedd good into it nice shit man all the way keep it up good luck on ur next one

word to whoever said this was twisted yo...

In fact that part about the little girl made me sick to my stomach :(

Disgusting...but the topic was different? and the shit was dope...but the way things were described made me unnereved...in fact I couldn't believe anyone would think of doing something like this...much less rapping about it...

anyways dope piece but your are Twisted Ike...very much so...

linx in mah sigg-e y0...

Done and done for everyone here. More feed.

EDIT:

and, I apologise Def reaper... I do not purposely think of these thoughts, the strike me all the time and I cannot change it. And don't even trip, I get a LOT worse thoughts than these.

You are one fucked up individual. but thats okay cause it was a dope piece, good flow and imagery to it.. Could have been more creative with some of the vocab and used some multies, but overall a good piece

man this shit was nice better than going to the movie i just couldnt wait to see what would happen at the end and it was exciting goood rhyme scheme stayed on track and you also had good structure even though you sounded like a child melester it's all good though

the second verse made me sick...that shit is fucked up.

Yo nigga dat shit was crazyyyyyyyyyyyy.....i dont understand how ya niggaz think up dis ideas......tizted shit was mad dope and i like da different chapters and whole concept......it had a good flow and wordplay and everything keep it up.......hit my links up to if ya could......
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...07#post3457607
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=249574

lol thanks yall.

damn nigga u got some dirty shit in ur mind. lol just playin wit ya
this shit was some of the dopest shit ive eva seen nigga
it flowed crazy ideas nigga im gonna qoute The frosted flakes tiga on dis 1
this shit wasnt good it was great

comment on dis fo me

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=249716

yo shit was str8 fire u should come hit up my page it plays sum of my songs on it www.myspace.com/mousedub LOOK OUT $ THE ALBUM BOTH SIDES OF THE STORY!!!!

Yes Twizted is a fucked up individual who needs to seek help. But I enjoy his open mics because of how simple they are to read, and how clear things appear. No uneccessary vocabulary skillz, and complex wording, although that is what adults tend to enjoy. But how interesting they are makes up for that in a way. Instead its very basic and simple and keeps me reading. Flow was solid in almost every section. Your topics are quite similar for you topicals but whatever.

Now I must know, would you ever consider doing these things. For example, being with a 9 year old? Thats the only thing that stands out here, i know you wouldnt feed a 9 year old acid, or kill your parents, gather yourselves up and say "Now we're a family" lol. Those are just clearly demented thoughts. But the whole 9 year old thing? Would you actually follow through with that shit or what?

And if you need help Twizt, I'm here for ya buddy lol.....jk peace, enjoyed
this.


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yes, I do.

but 9 year olds are ugly. I like 5 year olds.

funny shit cuz u used this in a battle against me , even tho u got like 10 hours longer than me , we still cul , dope piece homie , dope piece

This Piece Made Feel A Lil Crazy . This Piece Was Deep, Also Flow Was On Point. Felt It Alot. No Multies, But U Had Good Concept To Understand, Very Clear For Me. Word Scheme''nice''. This Piece Is Crazy Though. Nice Drop
7..8/10

Word^^^