could have had deeper vocab u know that type that makes u're spine tingle as shit unfolds but yeah it waz tight fairly decent structure
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could have had deeper vocab u know that type that makes u're spine tingle as shit unfolds but yeah it waz tight fairly decent structure
:hump:.....nuff said
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Originally Posted by DVSMIND
figures.............. :jerkoff: ...........onli you'd pull something off like that^^
yo dis was a nice thread o gotta give it to yall
soundz like da 1 wit ladie streetz and br3ndy da killa and shellz
nice flow on dis shyt
nex tyme let me do a remix wit it
A remix huh...okQuote:
Originally Posted by YoungB
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not a bad drop... could have been done differently... on some super dope shit... but... it was iight... couple more metaphors... few more enuendos... (sp?) fuck it... flow was iffy on both parts... but not bad... I'd collab with either of you... keep it goin.
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Originally Posted by Brandon Heat
str8 thx for the feedback brandon
Werd..thanks. UppinQuote:
Originally Posted by Brandon Heat
uppin for more feedback plz
Uppin bitches
upping for more feedback,.....................thx
correction only i COULD pull of somthing like that...Quote:
Originally Posted by phillycannonz
Hit my Forbidden thoughts Collab wit IJL :2thumb:
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this is Young_Block Philly yea like i was saying it was good flow was off tha rtyhm scheme was tight as cold ass hell tha whole 3 verse was a 28/32 to me Keep it up ~1~