Consciousness, It's Bothersome

3/4 time signature? And thanks for the stuff, I think I'm a reincarnation of Poe. :thumbup:

Talking about advanced vocabulary, not even Poe would probably understand my OM House of the Desperate, probably.

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i agree with johnny..it was kind of hard to follow, it took a couple reads until i understood it...the conversation part i could vision as "Conversation With A Vampire" by Ras Kass, the minds coinciding with eachother was different, your vocabulary was very complex and broad throughout the verses..imagery and descriptions were vivid, and I thought the title of the piece was a good relation..your structure/rhyme scheme really stood out to me, your internal and external rhyming was dope...overall this piece was pretty ill despite how hard it was to comprehend..keep writing..oNE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250776
please leave feed in my OM

coveraged a wide range but good overall

yea hard to follow..flow was good..strcutre was good you went off topic was couple of times not mch but a few....you should work on topic and make a bit easier to follow..i seen other drops from you and they were dope but this one seemed not dope...rhymes were good complexity was iight here could have been better..stay up..peace

o_O Off topic? Like where. Word, I need to get around to fucking RTFing but I'm busy with my novels and shiz. This one was more of just something that I wrote up faster then the rest. It's kind of hard to follow I suppose, but it's just comparing a loyal dog to a boy who wants to help himself.