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ya kno i cant vote but if i could i think id give this to pax because even though his rhytem and flow was a little off, his lines were hard n a lot rougher than lifetyls...also lifestyl...
I spit harder than a Cactus....wtf is dat supposed 2 mean....right after i read that i knew pax would get the edge in this..
however pax u really needa ta work on ya shit, theres like no constant flow in your writing...
rhyming-life
punches-pax
meta-pax
structure-tie
vote=pax
lifestyl the line about a cactus was wack as hell and talkin bout boys girl is kinda played out you need to elevate but you will get better with time...read the tutorials about wordplay ect.....unlike these other cats i will vote
200 votes=gay......................................... .
uppin like plane in take off!!!! Vote or Die!!! lol
need this voted on yall... shit where are the voters?
Pax took it with mostly better everything. Life needs work but he has the idea I guess.
Blah I aint cut out for voting in FL... Whatever, Pax took it blah blah blah
sdl;fksd;lfkls;kfklfkksahfjhjkahfsj v/ - pax
Ok look nigga i peeped ya other battles and ya punchlines was sorry
Not mine though dey hit harder den slam dunks..............from amare
aight
See listen to da metaphores dat come off da tip of my tongue
I had ya bitch last night singing to me like.................IMMMMM SPRUNGGGG
eeeehhh...
I said bitch calm down i thought ya got a man
She said yea but he got me obssesed wit you hes ya numba 1 fan like stan
aight...
So nigga im sorry but work on ya skillz ya soft..........ya need to practice
While me on da other hand im spittin harder den a cactus
spitting? you ment stingin worse then a cactus?? weak for poor wording
I aint dissin religon but i know ya was gonna be soft pax
So i guess ima have to kill dis religous icon.............cuz i spit anthrax
ok
noting intresting, noting stood out really a couple of ok hits keep elevating...
vs
Found you in "bitch slapped" kid must be used to the "lifestyle"..
ya "rhymes tired" like "old hook"-ers he bites offa "MTV LIVE".. ***
aight...
kid says "he aint big" no hesitation, guess his pics all compensation..
no dedication, only prize this poll hands you is consolation..
ok, no punch
find room to run...outside of this forum, ya skills diminished when ya finished
ya title..
suicidal? he must be, why ay thnk the ribbons on this kids wrist say "dont open before christmas"..
his gift to us while the polls leave him "listless"..
streched like hell.....
i tricked-his brain, one more loss for him, status quo remains..
Just call this "noweight" a "hilton" cuz a hard spit from him would be a "walk through Paris"..
word-play good, flow wasnt, decent hit..
Fearless? no, i bring em to the party cuz i always needa beer bitch..
weak ending....
all around you had more word-play and i thought better hit so you won but fix ya strcutre kid that shit was all fucked up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248120
leave a vote in my battle you guys thanks....
vote this up yall, let someone win this!!!!!fifty.
Punches-pax
Structure-pax
Word Play-pax
Vocab-umm both
creativity-both
pax hit em wit nice punches shit was almost close..but pax punched harder..nice shit from both of ya
v/pax
^^^ those vote shouldnt count for shit......
dont explain shit or noting,
how you know he even read the verse??
EXPLAINE VOTES ONLY SHOULD COUNT...
were you brake the whole verse down not just
punch: him
flow:her
vocab: him
vote: him
^^ thats hit sucks.....
who is the mod for this??
so i can pm about this nonsense.....
pax getz my vote on this. i felt his verse came stronger with the punches.
lifestyle, your punches came weak. honestly you spoke about his girlfriend which has nothin to do with it then on top of that you made it come weak. your rhymes could've came stronger what they did. pax had a nice flow and structure to come with for his verse alnog with the hot punches & personals. lifestyle, work on better punches, your flow was okay but could have been more on point.
vote/pax
hmmm.
I vote fo pax betta verse more wordplay..
life-Iike ur verse to but didn't convince me to vote for u..
v/pax
idk what popedogg is talkin about... no hate just dont understand...
structure-life/pax
flow-life
personals-pax
punches-pax
v//pax