-
how heck i seeing 13-14 yr olds dropping sick hot verses...dayum!
in-fact i'm inclined to believe thats not your true age..lol
-A place of sugar coated smiles, where gratitude will go a mile
Where the burglars are the only ones who’ll pull a trigger on a dial
thats just great i must say
Paint your perfect picture.. Colors lies and fade the blush
Its such a touchy topic, So sense of logic isn’t touched
my type of ish right here
painting pictures
your sure good at it
advice uhm?... well forget that..just feek free to give me advice on my pieces when you see them... yyoung as you claim to be
dope joint
ups
-
Yo, this topic was deep man…nice shit…flow was on point…structure a lil off….vocab was good…multis were there…overall a pretty damn good piece….I can see you’re a good topical writer…Keep It up…pz
-
-
Nice peace...goood multis,imagery,structure was decent and vocab was...all u need to do is work on the structure and u'll be straight...keep up the good work
-
-
-
upping!!
goddamn peep it people
-
-
that was deep..i was impressed by ya structure and how everything flowed plus u used a great topic shit really kept me in until the end...great closer by the way keep it comin.
-
-
Good drop man....vocab was real good in this one....imagery was there...caught ya multis in it...flowed real nice...also had an interestin topic.....shit was dope...good drop man....hit me up for a collab....peace.
-Play-Boy
-
nice drop..
.. the vocab set this off, it had very nice imagery to.. which made it fun to read. i never got bored while reading it, and thats what i look for in a piece. the flow was very nice to. same with structure. this was a all around dope piece. keep the shit up and i look foward to seeing another OM by you.
-
-
check out the drop people
-
aight critisism
flow-wasn't bad but had its moments were it waz mehh
structure-4 tha most part decent
vocab-can't complain it waz good
only thing that got me were 2 lines that to me seemed irrelevant 2 tha whole thing other than that nice.
