Re-read the post lay. and you DO assume too much.
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Re-read the post lay. and you DO assume too much.
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
Could have been decent, should have choose a much better word choice/delivery.
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
True... but again, you could have choosen a better delivery on the punch. I'm sure this is a double personal though, that most people wouldnt know. the drunk driving bit. Decent punch.
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
lol.
All your battles fake, I heard a lot of dope heads left ya crew in a sec, herb
Well I know 0 - like 74893274 is impossible, unless we talking ya real record
Absolutely terrible dog. Just the fact that you threw in 74893274, cause how in the hell is this supposed to flow if you actually read that number outloud. Bad wording.
Fuck lookin' up dresses for cleavage, role model? shut the hell up 'for I get pushy
Look we all know every kid looks up to Lay D... in attempts to get pics of pussy
lol.
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
First time I read this, I was like, blah, but then I read it again, and the double meaning on jack shit was pretty tight.
No one learns shit from your wack verses. teachin' aint an excuse to duck
We all beggin' for you to lesson them lines, please do cuz they stretched as fuck
Practice what you preach. lol.
Mom does everything for you fag. Kiss ya pains goodbye, this time I wont letter
So watch as I leave Lay Torso bad his moms'll have to stroke it better.
Decent.
N' I'm sorry 'bout ya site beef.. It's sad as hell, quit fightin' wit' spit lay
It's aight tho, eventually ya'll kiss n' make up.... Fuckin' crossdressers these days.
wack. how long are heads going to think Lay/$pit punches are fresh.
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
benefit of the doubt is pretty played by now on lay, and this was decent at best... just a little to bland.
VS
you know it's mine bitch, you're the saddest guy in denial
stealing my old crews? wtf.. you weren't satisifed with my style?
Eh, you know this has been used alot, in different words, but I suppose its kinda fitting for the situation..
you can go ahead and bring your boys, i'll fuckin blast ya crew
i mean just think about it.. nvm, that's way too much to ask of you
lol.
i'm smashin dude, a vet who's 15? no way this foo here's sick
cuz you've only been able to son kids for about two years bitch
Not feelin it.
keep pretendin like you know shit, but we ain't admittin ya gifted
you understand the win? that just means you ain't gettin it Twizted
Cool.
started audio so i peeped n' you ain't as hood as doubt bitch
n' i'd congratulate you.. if there was actually something good about it
Nah.
but i gotta admit it stunned me, not cuz your verse was best
it's cuz ya actually found something you do even WORSE than text
I like straight foward, hard hitting personals like this. cool.
try backing up your ego for real because you suck at bluffing
your trash talk is like ya sig.. looks cool but still adds up to nothing
First time I read this, I was like, huh... but this shit is dope. the zeros.
wankster faggot, tired of the front when you're losin in rapping
so if your verses gets props.. it's cuz we know you use em for acting
dec.
heard bout ya moms kickin you out, i know it's awful n' hurts
but it ain't got shit on the pain ya mom had when she saw you at birth
not really feelin this. I know I said I like personals, but this wasnt really a hard hitter.
ugly motherfucker, keep on actin hard with a knife like it helps
when all i gotta do is give you a mirror n' you'll start slicin YOURSELF
Harsh personal. Damn.
Pretty close to decide on. I think if twizted would have came with better wording/delivery, and one more solid punch, he would of had you Lay.
But vote - Lay Doubt, just BARELY.
yeah i prolly shoulda blew this motherfucker out.. but i was lazy. oh well, saul says i murdered shit. thanks for the votes. good battle.
Quit frontin' like you got friends, the truth makes lay not wanna live
Fact is lay's even a loaner, when he's got no money to give
Jesus bitch, LD can't stand losing... you drink so much I'm dying
But you still sway more than half your drunken buddies driving.
And you'll never get bitches like me... you still cry and pout
About how all the girls need you... in the nuts when you asked 'em out
Sayin' you steal from peeps, I dont believe it. Matter fact that shits obserd...
Cuz we all know in this life you aint jack shit... lol.... word.
All these bitches thinkin' you got dope concepts.. Shit, you aint even clever
See I'd give you the benefit of the doubt but there aint been one since........ ever.
vs
i'm smashin dude, a vet who's 15? no way this foo here's sick
cuz you've only been able to son kids for about two years bitch
keep pretendin like you know shit, but we ain't admittin ya gifted
you understand the win? that just means you ain't gettin it Twizted
ugly motherfucker, keep on actin hard with a knife like it helps
when all i gotta do is give you a mirror n' you'll start slicin YOURSELF
vote/ twizted
Remeber to poll your votes.....
lol I just realised I didn't even bother looking at Twiz's sig cos I remembered it was a chronic leaf so I didn't get the adds up to nothing line by Lay, but guess it's cooler than I said
Twizt:
Damn, mad word-play, shit was consecutive... i think u came hard with personals and all... some punches were just decent, others opened my eyes up... solid verse... overall it was hard..
Lay:
You hit hard at first, then got weak, then back to hard... so it wasn't stable but all around a good verse, the personals were dope and u were witty, but the punch-lines themselves didn't stand out as much as Twizt's... this battle was extremely close and I felt that after randomly reading both verses, i had to vote and get this battle active... very good battle...
v/Twizted
born to kill, saul.goode, jay walker, vaskez, dirty shanks <-- all voted for me. how am i losing 3-4? lord have mercy jesus christ.
Twizt:
Your whole verse was a nice solid verse. Punches were hittin, personal non personal, nice shit all around. Flow was decent and the consistency was there. Structure was decent as well. Nonetheless, a solid verse.
Lay:
Ya verse was stable, but fell off at times, which meant it was consistent enough. You usually come harder than this. But all around dope verse man. Your punches hit, but not AS hard as Twizted's. Yours were good, dont get me wrong, just didnt stand out too much. You came very close though.
ALthough, one winner is picked, the battle was a good battle yet it was very close and hard to decide, but it balls down to a better verse.
V/ Twizted.