Originally Posted by Dat
Dude, i have no problem with your feed and thanks, but i have to justify myself as that has made me look quite bad.
First off, this part of your feed.
If i was rhyming this over a track, it would flow well. I could make it flow well anyway, which is all i need to worry about. Structure, in an OM - isnt important unless it is so bad your reading 3 syllables after 8 syllables etc..
Irrellevent... My choice in font is to make my OMs readable for people who think they are too complicated.
Multis are basically alliteration. Having alot of words that rhyme together, is simply a complex rhyme scheme. If you read it through properly, you would see that they actually fit near enough perfect.
Ive covered this topic inside and out, but this OM has nothing to do with the story 'Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde'.
If you read properly, you will see that im describing how i feel. I mention that i have killed, and that i dont know if i enjoy it or i enjoy hating it.
The topic is 'Goodbye, Mr Hyde.' because i am conflicting with my bad side, my inner temptations. I know they have the best of me, so i kill myself. Hence - 'Say goodbye to Mr Hyde.'
If you were familiar with the topic, you would now understand what im saying. Im not rhyming out the story of Jekyll & Hyde.. Im calling my bad side Mr Hyde - because he's bad... Meh.
Everybody says this.. lol i have 3 OMs linked in my sig, if you want to see more work - drop some feed on them :thumbup:
Thanks anyway, i hope i made it clearer for you now.
