Without You

thanks for comments y'all, good encouragement

luv the concept and shit luv this song hope u make it to audio id like to hear it....
by the way
Apna tho sadyoon janmoo ka naata hai,
Jaan se jaan ko khon judha kar patha hai,
Tere siva.....tereeee siva-a-aaaa,
Tere siva, is darya ka nahin koin kinara sanam, nahin koi kinara,
Sanam. <----- translate that... whats it mean

i liked it it was easy to understand

it was good homie keep p the good work

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Apna tho sadyoon janmoo ka naata hai,
Jaan se jaan ko khon judha kar patha hai,
Tere siva.....tereeee siva-a-aaaa,
Tere siva, is darya ka nahin koin kinara sanam, nahin koi kinara,
Sanam. <----- translate that... whats it mean

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Apna tho sadyoon janmoo ka naata hai,
Our relationship is for many lifes and years.

Jaan se jaan ko khon judha kar patha hai
Were intwined, so who can take one life from the other.

Tere siva.....tereeee siva-a-aaaa,
Tere siva, is darya ka nahin koin kinara sanam, nahin koi kinara,
Sanam.

Without you.....With out you-o-ooo,
Without you this river has no end, no end my beloved.

It's basically lyrics from this asian sad song, which is propa, get me, so i sampled it in my OM, as for makin it audio, that aint gonna be possible till i get a mic, don't know when thats gonna happen.

Ah yea thanks for all the feed, finally after 2 flops i managed to get it right, i reckon it's a good idea to hsow some feelings in a song/om, so thanks,

need more feeds, so i know what ma dogs reckon

108 views but no were near the same amoint of comments come on y'all

Pretty Hot Work On the Structre A Lil Tho.

dude, thats sum gd shit, str8 from the heart, yh

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247007

Thanks for the comments.Rise

bout time i upped again.........more feeds, thanks for the comments, all taken inta account fo show

Uppin cause i need more feed, reply and give out your opinions, where are y'all

this was pretty cool i'd say..

the strong parts were the format and emotion you poured into this piece
and al;so had some dope rhymes.. had sum nice metaphoric phrases as well

keep em poppin dawg

shits good pak
i actually know a dude who killed himself over some broad
actually i was gonan write somethiing to the effect but will not, unless i start feelin it...

Shit feel bad about the dog who killed himself over someone, i'd never do that myself, cause if i love someone and they don't love me back then they don't deserve my love, simple.
Anyway, i just heard a lot bout htis kind of shit so i thought it was about time i tryed ta look from the perspective of someone who is willing to kill themselve for a woman.
Looks like my attempt has gone down well.
Thanks for all the comments and uppin for more.