Shadow

ight mayne, that shit was of the hook... i personally like this bar..

your compassion for it grows stronger as the harder times come, and it stays with you
and all of a sudden it had hit you, with undeniable strength, you loved it and you knew

:2thumb: that was nice like, :boobies: .. that shit was tight like :spank:... just for that i give you a quick solo :rocker: ... YEAH!!! :hosea: ..........

BUT :bee:hav... lol dam i need a life

LMFAOOOO at you kid.....budd-ha??.....fat like this....:noor:

Wow...I couldn't expect any less than this from a dope crew mate and friend. Your shit was real heart felt and deep down. Those last 2 lines blew me away...I felt as If I was in the story, not only reading it but standing there with that "Shadow". It was very down to earth and in a way so basic but so unwritten...If you can get what I'm saying. The ending was perfect...The fillers were perfect. The opening attracted the readers attentions. Your flow seemed a little off because of stretched lines but it still turned out dope as hell. Pieces as stretched as this one would really be a lot doper with more multis tho...You brought the heart and soul back to the Open Mics...and this piece here is worthy of any crew...Of all the crews you could be in...and after seeing this...I'm proud to be in the same crew as ya. Good job and keep that Dope Tum Tum shit up. You will be a great daily addition to Open Mic...Good Stuff...Peace, and watch for the collab I'm making coming out...Feat. Vafinest, Spekz, and a special guest...It'll be in OM by tomorrow night...Called "The Diaries"...Peace homie...Good drop

~NaSh

Aye nash you in to joinin any crews or any grfx.

ummmm...kid this is not where you ask shit like that...so either leave some feed or leave...thank you lmao

Rofl @ this kid... NO!! Uppin for ya homie...

my bad g. Aiight im out. nothin but respect. peace

aight uppin for more feed

this was a tight piece, liked the flow, struture was good, it was a pretty good read

aight thanks....uppin for more feed

pretty cool piece here.. there was some complexity.. and your vocab was real good.. i felt u started off good.. kind of felll off in the middle.. but in like the last four lines.. you picked it up.. I wasnt feelin some lines.. but then there were some lines that i thought were dope.. you had good imagery..n ur lines were pretty deep.. i understood what u were tryin to say.. but overall.. it was a pretty good piece.. good job..

aight thanks fopr the feed......

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