Uppin.
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Uppin.
Haha that shit was off tha hook! funny shit right there, that sum new Eminem shit homie... tight... the rhymes was good, i liked the multis... there was no topic at all and it worked lol! it was just some random bullshit that was fun as hell to read... the multis was great, at times there u was rhymin the whole line, i liked that... it flowed nicely, no prollems there, but i found that the structure was off a bit... 1 thing i didnt like at all was the chorus... u need 2 change that... honestly... but that was pretty good, i think it would have been better in an audio or something tho...
keep it up man... peep the OM's in my sig... thanks pc
yea Diz Was Hot No Doubt, Had Some Real Creative Punchlinez..
Shit Was Grimey hahaNo Doubt..
Bout Everything Was On Point..Keep Dat Shit Up Yo
Get At Me
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Your fuckin crazy man!!!! I love this shit tho this is gotta b a classic all the punches were hot as hell...this shit should go down as the funniest piece ever to be dropped...overall 10/10 man this shit was crazy hotttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This peice was real good man...besides the fact that it was super fuckin demented at the beginnin...you had good word play...nice structure, some lines was off but fuck it...crazy topic...overall it was a real good peice dog...good shit and thanks for the feedback on my OM
-Play-Boy
Appreciate the feed, im working afternoons this week so im on here early uppin this so i hope it dont get slept on, Uppin.
:angelsmil
yeah this shit is pretty dope man.. got mad jokes up in here.. enterrtains me more than 98% of the crap on this board at the moment.. your sick character is begining to shine thru..lolz
some punches were doper than others but fuck it its all held together pretty well..
some nice multies as well like you expanded the syllables some more now
so you get my 2 thumbs n 2 guns up
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Your verses were fuckin crazy. Ya had some creativity like a mufucka. The shit you rapped about in some of it was weird as fuck but your wordplay made up for it. That shit was entertaining and put a smile on my face. I give it a 9/10. I dont like the hook. That shit sucked but the rest was sick. Keep it up.
~one~
Just got in from work uppin this mothafucka. Oh yeah urban babe your shit is wack face it lol.
Ive had 166 people view this piece but only 14 have replied i do appreciate the feed but id like a bit more. Some of the better writers of Om should be replying to this im just as nice as anybody on OM.
Sorry it took a soldier so long to hit u up on this but this was a great piece. You gave me joke all the way through. You had some very good rhymes in your piece and i liked the way you through the punches. Nice wun warchild.
Lemme pop up the shop and I'll reply when I get back.
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Originally Posted by UrbanXBabe
AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH.. :wtf:
She must of been on her period how weak were those rhymes lol not even worth wasting my ink penning a response back.