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BaKeR had the harder punches in this battle. The opener was solid. The mighty mouse personal was pretty good. At times, some of your lines were stretched though.
M.O.U.S.E., usually you come way harder than this. But, I know you got skills. You punches were average. The ryhme scheme was average as well....Flow and Structure was excellent.
VOTE - Baker for better punches
this was a very weak battle to be honest
both of you guys need to elevate
but baker hit hard with his punches
mouse i really was'nt feelin
both of you need to elevate
nice battle
what a shock ...not really ....
battle grade=C
vote=Baker
M.O.U.S.E. best-
These not lies his lips are filled with three main course MEALS
He flips dough only when he bakes for Mrs. FIELDS(Cookie shop)
~VS~
BaKeR best-
In this game of cat and mouse, your strugglin to escape....
This overweight rodent ate 2 much cheese........................
.......................but still calls himself mighty an puts on a cape. (mightymouse)
Mouse- Great structure and flo- Ur rhymes were a bit basic- Ur punches were soft- you need more wordplay- I have definatly seen better from u-
Baker- U had a weak structure- which hurt ur flo- Ur punches and personals were definatly stronger- was good to see some wordplay in there- Ur lines were stretched and this made ur rhymes seem simple- change ur structure and ur whole verse will change-
This is a tough battle to vote on- u are completly opposite- Imma hafta base the vote on punches and personals tho-
V/Baker