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Audio fix ripped this battle.......Sin ur punches were kinda weak... u couldve came harder than that foreal...throw some personals 2 u could do better than that... u jus need to elevate foreal...... Audio fix... u aint throw that many personals but yu punches were str8 sick..... u ripped it wit the punches and u won cause otha dude jus threw punches too.... but his was weak.....
Vote goes to.....Audio fix....
Did ya'll read the same I did, Let me break down this vote, I know I've been gone for a while cause I wuz getting my life right with Christ.....but I think this was simple to judge
Aight....Sins rhymes were basic, there wuz no complexity at all, his punches were so so my fav line wuz:
say you come from England, eh? well imma crush ya
you could tape a 100$ bill to ya dick n bitches wont touch ya
this wuz good because it had a little personal blow in it and a decent punch line at the end.......I think that if you throw more punches in each line you'll be more efective.....but keep it up you got potential
Audio Fix had more runs and was more creative with his punches and had more punches in each line. His was definately more complex and more enjoyable. Fav Line:
"So quit spittin. He’s from nowhere..and they wont let you represent
This fuckers so poor….he snorts my shit…just to gain a scent"
Winner: Audio Fix
uppin....
lets get this closed....c'mon people...
up'n
uppin for both....................................
Sin
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audio fix, huh? sounds like an addiction
but you got no skillz so ur punches r missin
good :box2:
i use basic lines...just to over come this herb..
he probably gonna drop some wack shit n re-post wit another verse
*ok
say you come from England, eh? well imma crush ya
you could tape a 100$ bill to ya dick n bitches wont touch ya
was'nt feeling it :sleep2:
the point is..we rated by punches n structure
all of which you lackin so jus shut the fuk up-herb
what happen
thinkin you got a chance is like by a lottery ticket
a million in one, a shot you took....n missed it
NICE :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
this is, ya last battle battle cuz im leavin you fixed
so Noone will have to worry bout you ridin their diks
*str8
you had a good flow going, nice concept had weaker wordplay,
also had good structure
Audio
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Ima cut you up n’ spit you out it’s about time I pounce violently
N trounce this seasame street thug n plug a slug into this wannabe
nice start
Effortsley confuse sin make him think he’s lost the winning touch
This automatic couldn’t hack it like I threw-up a clutch
str8
He’s 19 n’ hasn’t seen an emcee like me rip holes in the tooth-less
I’m The lyrically roof-less--rip out ribs n prove who the best is
weak
sin could only hurt me if he had 6 friends all of them deadly
And even that group…wouldn’t be dirty ima murk u easily
*weak
Newbie bitch challenging me like he thinks he’s the tits
Spittin’ pre-write’s aint gonna get you anywhere quick bitch
*ok
So quit spittin. He’s from nowhere..and they wont let you represent
This fuckers so poor….he snorts my shit…just to gain a scent
*good closer.
ya flow wasnt even on man nice word play going on but other then that
nice structrue
vote Sin.
up'n
whats popin bloodin fuck that nigga magic
no freepostin nigga
learn da rules
Ya'll structure was ..ewww - For both, it was a line stretched for no reason, casue it didn't make anysense, and it didn't make a point, it didn't flow wit the verse and shit.. You just had a long ass dumb line..Don't do that..If u gone stretch ya'line, at least make sure it flows and it makes sense and is making a strong POINT- U feel me.. and i'm talking about this - (look at line 2)
(SIN)
i use basic lines...just to over come this herb.. < what does this rhyme wit?
he probably gonna drop some wack shit n re-post wit another verse < wtf
say you come from England, eh? well imma crush ya <
you could tape a 100$ bill to ya dick n bitches wont touch ya < Straight, you gone rhyme the same word in a bar wit elementary content)
Content is important when u do shit like repeating something, stretching out a line. Cause you suppose 2 be doing that because u thinkin like ''hey, I gotta make sure u feel me, so I'ma tell it like it is'' You just did that shit cause you ain't know what the hell u was doing-
(Audiofix)
Structure was str8, now you gotta tighten up your rhyme scheme - ( a..a..b...a..a..b) u know what rhyme scheming is..cause some of your rhymes kinda fuked up certain shit...Like :
Ima cut you up n’ spit you out it’s about time I pounce violently
N trounce this seasame street thug n plug a slug into this wannabe
Effortsley confuse sin make him think he’s lost the winning touch
This automatic couldn’t hack it like I threw-up a clutch
That fuked me up when I was reading it for some reason, like it shouldn't be there or something..But maybe it was just me though- So Make sure when u do something like that..Again, just that it flows.. u know, u can read something slow and it should sound like its damn near ready to go over some sorta beat, any beat- and u tight..(Try thinkin of a song in your head as you read over your verse)
v. Audio
uppin
i vote 4 sin he had harder punches sorry oc
punches=sin
struc=both
personals-none
audio u had the go work on personals
dam this still open.....ah forget it.....
i did use a opersonal with 6 freinds /deadly sin's....u get that?
lol anyway...yeah try to close these fella's......
seeyall in the tourney...
peace
o got sin, but it was a close one. I was feeling him a bit more
i definatly vote sin, was good battle, but "you could tape a 100$ bill to ya dick n bitches wont touch ya" that was gd lol :P
c'mon help me close bma battle peeps :P