Is this Rb? EVERYTHING EXPOSED

I guess this writting some up what you think of RB from your standpoint. You had a great flow, nice word choice / usage. Unfortunately, there is a lot of truth in what your are speaking...

meh piece. u had some nice, some decent n some blah. i think u shoud work on ur rhyming kinda like this:

instead of writing:

i ran to kill
and i jumped to fill

u can make the last 2 similar to make it sound doper like:

i ran to kill
and had her hand to fill

jus some advice.

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Originally Posted by Record

meh piece. u had some nice, some decent n some blah. i think u shoud work on ur rhyming kinda like this:

instead of writing:

i ran to kill
and i jumped to fill

u can make the last 2 similar to make it sound doper like:

i ran to kill
and had her hand to fill

jus some advice.

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thanks bro, no hate homs that makes me elevate thanks yo, thanks fo da feed,

Was a gr8 piece, i mean...u had dope as fuck lines in there!!
check, this was def. an eye opener for me

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i came on here to up my vocabulary,crazy carl & jonny helped me
-Warchild influenced me, Edicius left feed that pushed me

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you had really nice flow as well, pretty good... structure was nice to follow, and also nice to see some names in here that were being mentioned for respect aswell, a great drop... nice homie

thanks, uppin

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Originally Posted by Trema

Edicius left feed that pushed me

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dope

:thumbup:

Thanks mike lol, uppin

uppin.....