I guess this writting some up what you think of RB from your standpoint. You had a great flow, nice word choice / usage. Unfortunately, there is a lot of truth in what your are speaking...
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I guess this writting some up what you think of RB from your standpoint. You had a great flow, nice word choice / usage. Unfortunately, there is a lot of truth in what your are speaking...
meh piece. u had some nice, some decent n some blah. i think u shoud work on ur rhyming kinda like this:
instead of writing:
i ran to kill
and i jumped to fill
u can make the last 2 similar to make it sound doper like:
i ran to kill
and had her hand to fill
jus some advice.
thanks bro, no hate homs that makes me elevate thanks yo, thanks fo da feed,Quote:
Originally Posted by Record
Was a gr8 piece, i mean...u had dope as fuck lines in there!!
check, this was def. an eye opener for me
you had really nice flow as well, pretty good... structure was nice to follow, and also nice to see some names in here that were being mentioned for respect aswell, a great drop... nice homieQuote:
i came on here to up my vocabulary,crazy carl & jonny helped me
-Warchild influenced me, Edicius left feed that pushed me
thanks, uppin
dopeQuote:
Originally Posted by Trema
:thumbup:
Thanks mike lol, uppin
uppin.....