you need to elevate on your flo okay and the vocab was on a middle level so try to get ya flo and shit up. hot topic though, it was tight U juz need 2 improve a litlle bit on sum shit
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you need to elevate on your flo okay and the vocab was on a middle level so try to get ya flo and shit up. hot topic though, it was tight U juz need 2 improve a litlle bit on sum shit
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not bad, could be a bit more entertaining, but yea cool piece man, didnt bore me to the death, wording was good at times, concepts were aight and shit, pretty decent piece you got here, keep writing man.
Dip my pen and dive… yet I have only drunk fun
Slump’s n unpaid bills, and plenty of west coast Canada sun
Shunned by true pain I feel drama in the eyes of homeless
The whelps of distress and outcall transgress the steady press
Injured and forgotten stumble across these streets…
The feats of yesterday drained on vocal cords and beats.
^^favorite part.
cool shit.