Ear To The Ground

yea, good shit mayne.

Flow and vocab were real on point, and the topic and story were real, too.

I'd have to agree tho, another verse would be straight. Prolly give it like an 8.5 or 9/10

one.

yo this was dope the topic wasnt so great but it was still good. You had a good flow goin and ur vocabs coulda had more. Other than that it was good

bump

i ahve to say carl you have been improvng tremendously and it shows, rhymes are great here, topic was different and creative and also interesting, i enjoyed it, flow and strcuutre was great, even and smoooth, nicley written and layed out, great drop, keep it up, peace

yo i was feelin it u had everything ok keep up the good work

uppin

Nice piece...
definitely feeling this one Carl...

Always knew you was a good writer since
SS, when I was in the league. anyways nice
drop nice examples of expressing yourself.

"Time is money, and a picture's worth a thousands words;
Then why this time, I only picture myself being barely heard."
^
nice line my fav line. you had a lot of quotables in this
piece. But that's the one that stood out the most.
Was feeling the steady flow and solid meaning.
Nice drop indeed.


Please check my OM out 'Mental War -Spirit Soars'

Peace and stay dropping.

thanks man, up

Great drop, liked it a lot. Coulda made it a bit longer, expanded on it, but what was there was dope. Lotta emotion, good wordplay made the slightly off flow irrelevant. The vocab wasn't too complicated, but I didn't see nothing elementary either. All in all, a sick piece that coulda been refined just a bit more. 8/10

bump

uppin

very good om.. the vocab flow and word play were all very good.. structure wasnt as good as the rest but still a damn good piece.. keep up the good work

thanks