To Kill or not to Kill...(p'rt-1)

good looking blud

I didn't care for the opening line, obviously working off a cliche. The word choice in the line:
Hundreds & thousands of guns litter cities
That guns litter the city I thought were interesting. With short lines, the flow in audio probably would sound good fast. Rhyming was solid with inner and some outer multis.
Thanks for checkin out mine.

good looks out crazy

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this peice was really good u had a real strong flow and good wordplay I give u 10/10
keep it up homey lookin to hear u more

yo im waitin for a part two where u could make a collab wit me if u want aight man

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Originally Posted by J-Hova

this peice was really good u had a real strong flow and good wordplay I give u 10/10
keep it up homey lookin to hear u more

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wow 10/10 thanks man

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Originally Posted by SkullBreaker

yo im waitin for a part two where u could make a collab wit me if u want aight man

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yeah maybe fosho... ill hit you on the pm a lil later

pz


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