On my own

Thanks for the feed, uppin

uppin this

hot vocab. Not sure how it would sound actually vocalized, which would be the only question, but if you can make it happen, it would be straight.

Only thing I wasn't really feeling was the chorus....I don't really understand this line:

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Originally Posted by Trema

on my own, i made this vocabulary makes me able to rhyme

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maybe there's supposed to be a comma, maybe there's supposed to be a 'that', or maybe I'm jes fucking stupid...ionno.

Anyway, keep up the good shit mayne.

uppin, bump

uppin