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now hes alsleep,a deep sleep,going back to wonderland
but then a cloud,is in his head,now hes back on devils sand
walkin through,tryin to survive,all the depths,in hell
but hes mental,suicidal,and has been behind a cell
full of demons,then he shakes,somethins wrong with his head
then he stops,still breathing,he really thought he was dead
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Hidden metaphors blinded by problems I seek non less than lessons
It Tells Lucifer was the greatest sign of protection before deception
Once an angel with wings but streams of pain sought what joy brings
Demons are discouraged angels, hatred is loves forgotten offspring
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"Open wounds appear to heal but the scars never mend
Sadism is your friend and your compassions mere revenge
But I intend to leave the scriptures with all but holy pleads
Truth is......inner demons is love rejected, o sweet misery"
Both of ya dudes had real insane verses. I think that Vafinest could have been more creative with word choice, but it was still real good. the whole piece was deep which made it interesting to read. The topic was wild, so that also made it fun to read. It was over all very good...