thanks my man ;D!
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thanks my man ;D!
this was sick yall both did good ya had sick flow and vocabs keep it up stay up
^ Word To Ya Mutha!!!!
Up, Up, And Awayyyyyy!!!
Pz. A Pz. A
When I read the title, I thought of a piece being from an aborted baby, but I've seen that before, so this was worth reading. For the first verse, the beginning was nice with imagery. My favorite part though was saying that it was the dad's fault. It stood out, maybe because of the caps, but I could picture how the dad would feel. For the second verse, I at first thought it was his brother, but it could fit as his friend as well. Some specification would work, unless I missed it. Both verses had the emotion needed.
this shit is a real emotional peace, and i do hope you find your light!
no bar really stuck out to me, but thats what makes this so strong is you need the whole thing to really validate the point...good flow man
keep em comin