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wow nice shit good description of that girl....as quoted by nique word lovely imagnery in this piece n i think it was dope...nice flow n shit aswell good structure just to throw in lol...over all ...nice shit keep it up.
thnx
pretty damn good - your style is original and the way you presented this was good. The transitions werent sloppy the ending twist - verse was a good add on to the story line. Your rhymescheme was good - imagery was there it flowed well all together and was an original story line.
v/Pharoah
^your the one from HHS right.
no....... thnx tho
i dont even know what HHS stands for...... lol
hiphopscenes
just another Rapboard - theres a Pharoah there and he was pretty dope in the topical league last season - thats why I asked.
oh..... imma check out hhs...... any good??
yeah theres a topical tourn in progress there right now
this si my last up i guess........
Solid drop... your topic was expressed really nice... I enjoyed the ways you've expressed your opinion on paper. You did a very good job at dropping a quality writting.... Imma look for more from you in the future...
thnx
I liked that line, but the whole shit was propa. Man carry on, cause ya rhymes good, they got like a 20 caot polishing, ya know.Quote:
In the shadows of her footsteps,
Mine are the hands sweeping away debris in the paths she hasn’t took yet.
check out the story of a dons death, just wrote it 20 mins ago.
thnx uppin'
uppin'
your writing is improving, and im liking what i see.....very poetic in my opinion.....Your description of the women was very good, you went indepth.....like describing her hair....and her freckles.....it was just very good. Im looking foward to reading more from you man, and maybe a collab with you soon?
Hit up my piece, Objecting Nature
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